Primer drafted!

So the primer is drafted. I’ll be tak­ing a few days off and then I will ded­i­cate ten days, start­ing on Mon­day to re-write the whole thing. Once that is done, it will be for my proof-reader to check it.

It will be a piece of cake for Davina, I’m sure. It’s about 8,000 words now, and it will not be one word over 10,000. In about 30 pages you will have every­thing you need to play an adven­ture, includ­ing four pre­gen­er­ated char­ac­ters, the char­ac­ter sheet and an adven­ture script.

I have taken great pains (ask my eyes) to make the e-book read­able. A nice stan­dard font, sin­gle col­umn, so it looks great on your screen and plenty of white space, with no dis­tract­ing bor­ders. There will be a few illus­tra­tions of good taste and qual­ity to get you in the proper mood.

For­saken, the adventure

As for the adven­ture, it’s based on a premise I read or watched some­where as a boy and obsessed me enough to last into adult­hood. When I was a coun­sel­lor I used it to scare the youknowwhat out of my campers and so I did when I worked as a house­p­a­r­ent in a children’s home. I’ve writ­ten a few vari­a­tions of this story, and dis­carded them all, never been sat­is­fied with them. I love it and that’s why I offer it.

Imag­ine you are 12, just back from school and then nobody, absolutely nobody even your mom knows your name. It’s not just the shock, or being sud­denly home­less, own­ing noth­ing but a few coins and what­ever is in your back­pack, it’s that some­thing pow­er­ful, evil and cruel is after you.

Oh, and it’s Halloween.

Of course, in a role-playing game there should be always be a way out. And there is one in this adven­ture, but one which requires courage, being able to tell friend from foe and some think­ing. Are you up to it?

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